Spontaneous, no-revision haiku scrawled in a fit of boredom….
Snow concedes, contracts
Shadows shorten with each dawn
Totems bleed sweetness
Electric drill whirs
Thirteen miles of plastic hose
Grandpa had a bucket
Good dry wood burns clean
A grey squirrel tail, smoke and steam
Sweet in the hollow.
I love the second one, it made me laugh out loud. Good work Chuck, often the spontaneous stuff is the best. 🙂
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wish I could scrawl like you 🙂
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These are just excellent! Not “crap” at all! Very impressive, especially for first efforts! My favorite is number three, followed by number one, and then number two. Email me any time if you have questions, comments, or just want to email-yak for a while! *** 🙂 ***
Ron
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Reblogged this on Randa Lane – Haiku and More! and commented:
This brand new haiku poet shows great promise with these three haiku, the first ones he has ever written. PLEASE follow his blog…it’s the right thing to do!
Ron
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Thanks!
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These are fun!
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Reason enough to read AND write them! *** 🙂 ***
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